Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes in this team that believes that everyone has to practice.
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
To ensure the success, they should require to have new lab equipment for those who are doing the experiment for the project.
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Darnel doesn't have any reason to question their instructions, nut he wants an explanation for this exam.
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and also our long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Yes Terri won the game, but at the time, we didn't know that she had won.
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
The program cacellation's effect which bothered us the most, was
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Because you should have heard their voice when I told them how there vacation time would be be effected.
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
Regardless of what Grandpa said it will be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Rob commented that our neighbours should be welcoming to children outside of our neighbourhood.
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
Because neither Ben nor I had read the assignment, we did now know the definition of the world 'chide'.
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Marcus is a serious athlete who tries very hard, I'm sure we'll see a lot of his action in today's game.
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
The race between the three relay teams is close, none of the three, however, are giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Mr. P
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
My oldest sister, who is going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Having read the novel, The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
Because, there were so many things to do I couldn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills or go to my friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II maintained peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Stella requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
You should have followed these three steps: first; open the hood, second; check the level, and last; add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
Although my dog is different than yours, we won't have any problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offence, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
After the race began, Delia took these medals to the track club to the school located east of here.
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
"Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
She was quite young- no more than twenty-six- when he earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Yes, they're going to welcome whoever that wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
This car is a 1966 Mustang is extremely valuable these days regardless of what he reports in the TV show "Classic Car Reports".
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
DOL 23
Quiz!
DOL 24
Review quiz
DOL 25
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
The Titanic dragged more than 1,500 people into their graves, although it was believed to be unsinkable.
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
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DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
- Mr. Guarino told us that the twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II maintained peace in that country.
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange tripDOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
- You should have followed these three steps: first; open the hood, second; check the level, and last; add more oil.
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to togetherDOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
- Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 P.M. or was he out of student government?
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spiritDOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
- Walking quietly along the road, it was impossible for me to see the speeding car.
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of hereDOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
- "Nothing could be further from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career earlyDOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
- Yes, they're going to welcome whoever that wants to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reportsDOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
DOL 23
Quiz!
DOL 24
Review quiz
DOL 25
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
>>
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library